If you like Westerns that feel like they’ve got weight in the saddle, this is the one, because it doesn’t read like a checklist of tropes, it reads like a campfire story told by somebody who wants you to see the faces, hear the voices, and feel the pause right before the shooting starts; you’re getting a posse you can remember without trying, you’re getting wolves that feel legendary without turning the book into fantasy, you’re getting action that doesn’t skip the fear, and you’re getting a moral spine underneath it all, the stubborn insistence that even in a lawless place, you don’t leave people behind if you can help it.
And the best part is this, the book is built like the first installment of something bigger, because once you name a group The Immortals, once the newspapers get their hands on you, once the law realizes you’re the tool they can’t officially admit they need, you already know what comes next, more jobs, bigger bounties, worse men, and a legend that keeps growing whether the riders want it to or not.
It starts the way the best Westerns always start, not with a speech, not with a prophecy, not with somebody “destined” to be anything, but with a man coming back into town after hard days out in the brush, tired in the bones, steady in the hands, and still doing what needs done; JD Warloh rolls toward Crooked Creek with his team and his wagon, and with him is Darrell, a Black man who has learned what the world expects from him, and who has also learned something rarer, that JD is not playing a part, not putting on a kindness for show, but living it like it’s normal, and that right there sets the tone, because this book keeps doing that, it lets you feel the human stuff first, and then it lights the fuse.
Crooked Creek is the kind of place where you can still smell lawlessness in the woodwork, but it’s also the kind of place where the law is trying, where Sheriff Harriot is doing his job, watching his streets, keeping his eye on men who don’t check their guns at the door, and waiting on two federal Marshals who have been telegraphing their way toward trouble; by the time the pieces start moving, you can already tell this is not going to be a polite story, because the book doesn’t pretend the West was polite, it was personal, it was hungry, it was dangerous, and it was always one bad decision away from a coffin.
Then the cast walks in like a hand of cards getting laid down one by one, and each one comes with their own weight.
Blade and Graydon show up dressed cleaner than most men out that way, but don’t mistake that for softness, because they carry themselves like men who know exactly what violence costs and what it buys; Bella is there too, sharp-eyed, steady, somebody you want close when the world gets loud; Oliver Rex, a British gambler with a silver tongue and a gambler’s calm, sits at the tables like he owns the room, and Destiney Dalmore matches him, not as a tagalong, but as a partner, the kind that can read a room faster than most men can load a gun.
And then you meet Stephen, and you understand fast that he is not just another gun in town.
Stephen is a bounty hunter, yes, but the book makes sure you understand what kind, the kind that has done the ugly miles, the kind that has made it out of places he shouldn’t have, the kind that has a Comanche ally named Red Wolf who rides like a shadow out ahead, and the kind that travels with something you do not see in most Westerns, five Northwestern wolves, with one of them, Anubis, being a black giant of a creature that has seen more gunfire than most men, and has kept walking anyway.
That wolf pack is not a gimmick in this story, it’s part of the mythology, part of the intimidation, part of the companionship, and the book plays it smart, because it doesn’t ask you to “believe” in them like fantasy, it just shows you the results, what happens when men who think they own the world meet an animal that does not negotiate, does not bluff, and does not fear them.
Once the federal Marshals, Curtis and Gus, arrive, the job comes into focus, and it’s not small, it’s not local, and it’s not the kind of thing you take unless you’re either hungry, fearless, stupid, or built for it; there’s a problem out west, an outpost called Cutthroat Crossing, a place so nasty the name sounds like a warning and a dare at the same time, and the man at the center of it is David Francis, a butcher of a criminal, a leader of the kind of crew that doesn’t just rob, but erases witnesses, and stacks bodies so the law can’t even count the cost properly.
The Marshals don’t have the manpower to handle it cleanly, they don’t have the political patience to wait for help, and they don’t have the luxury of pretending it’ll fix itself, so they do what people do when the system is stretched thin, they deputize, they gamble on specialists, they take the ugly option that still has a chance of working, and they put it in Stephen’s hands.
Stephen does what you want a lead character to do, he doesn’t jump and bark and posture, he listens, he weighs it, he thinks through who he needs, and then he starts gathering his people, because this is the kind of job where you don’t “go see what happens,” you either go prepared, or you don’t go at all.
When the group finally says yes, it’s not just adventure, it’s arithmetic, and the book is honest about that too; the money is real, the danger is real, and the moment they commit, the clock starts ticking, because Cutthroat Crossing isn’t waiting on them, it’s operating, it’s killing, and if they move too slow, the problem changes shape.
From there, the story becomes a long ride into heat and distance, and what I like about the middle of the book is that it doesn’t treat travel like filler, it treats it like pressure; the desert miles, the camps at night, the conversations that slip out when people are tired and still have to keep watch, the wolves needing water, the constant awareness that bandits and hostile encounters are not “plot twists” out here, they’re the normal tax of being alive beyond the edges of town.
You learn more about Stephen and Red Wolf’s history, you see how the group handles one another, who jokes when they’re nervous, who gets quiet, who takes responsibility, who follows, who refuses to panic, and you start to realize what the book is actually selling under the gunfire, which is not just action, but trust, the kind of trust that’s earned when everybody knows the other person can fail, and still chooses to stand beside them anyway.
As they close in on Cutthroat Crossing, the tone tightens, because now the story is no longer “a journey,” it’s a plan; they’re not riding in blind, they’re scouting, choosing approaches, thinking in angles, thinking in high ground, thinking in how to get out alive after they get in, and the book keeps that tension alive by making you feel the logistics, because you can tell these characters have done this before, and you can also tell this one is bigger than usual.
Then the outpost finally arrives, and it hits like the door opening on hell.
Cutthroat Crossing is not just criminals sitting around waiting to be arrested, it’s organized, it’s cruel, it’s armed, it’s the kind of place where federal badges can get you killed instead of protected, and when the group makes their move, it becomes immediately clear that the worst part is not the gunfire, it’s the people, because the book doesn’t flinch from showing you what power does to men who think they can do anything they want.
The assault sequence is where the story earns its title, because it turns into a chaotic fight built out of split-second decisions, hard pushes, and ugly surprises; there are hostages, there are Marshals getting executed in the street, there is cruelty spoken out loud, and the group has to do what a good posse does, adapt fast, move with purpose, and accept that “clean” is no longer on the menu.
Explosives come into play, dynamite and grenades and the kind of desperate firepower you don’t pull out unless you already understand this is a survival fight, not a hero scene; people get hurt, plans get shredded, and the line between “we came to capture a man” and “we are fighting to make it out alive at all” disappears right in front of you.
And this is where Stephen takes the kind of damage that, in most stories, would be the end of him; he gets shot multiple times, he’s bleeding, he’s carrying Anubis, who is hurt too, and even in that wrecked state he’s still making calls, still refusing to leave people behind, still refusing to let a family get swallowed up by that place, and the book does something that matters here, it doesn’t turn that into a superhero moment, it turns it into a stubborn, half-conscious, gut-driven refusal to quit.
They get out, barely, dragging the wounded, hauling the wolf, bringing survivors who would’ve been dead if Stephen had treated them like “complications,” and they run for Whitewater Falls, because when a mission turns into a massacre, you don’t stand and admire your courage, you move, you live, you get to the nearest place with a doctor and a door you can lock.
In the aftermath, you meet Matthew McAllen, and the story takes a breath without getting soft; Stephen wakes wrapped in bandages, staring at the ceiling, asking the only question people ask after they survive something they shouldn’t have survived, “how am I still alive,” and the book lets that moment land, because it’s not just about the bullets, it’s about the fact that every single one of them took a risk that could’ve left their name in a shallow grave, and yet here they are, breathing, bruised, and still themselves.
When it’s finally over, when they’re riding back, when the dust settles into something like normal again, the Marshals return, and they don’t come alone; they bring Larry Horwitz, a newspaper editor and publisher with a camera and a hunger for a story, because what happened out there is the kind of thing the world turns into legend whether the survivors want it or not.
Horwitz tells them the truth in plain language, that people will name them, that the public will not leave it alone, that a story like this doesn’t stay private, and when he asks what the group is called, you can feel the weight behind it, because a name is not just branding out there, it’s a gravestone avoided, it’s a reputation earned, it’s a warning to the next man who thinks you’re easy prey.
And Stephen, in the most natural way possible, gives the only name that fits.
The Immortals.
That’s the whole ride, front to back, beginning to end, a dusty town that feels real, a posse that feels like it could’ve existed, a mission that grows teeth the closer you get to it, and a final act that earns its title through blood, grit, and the kind of survival that makes even the law stop and stare.
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